Name: fyction (Signed) · Date: 02 Dec 2020 02:06 AM · For: Try it
Finally got my ass caught up! Your writing flows so nicely which is awesome to read. I super dig all the nicknames for the guys haha love the dynamic so far. And I fuckin love Dice. She’s badass.

Name: Induced Euphoria (Signed) · Date: 09 Nov 2020 11:58 PM · For: Whats it mean?

Poor Gates - he was so close to the right name! So close!


I was finally able to catch up on my fanfic reading and all I have to say is - poor DJ! She's a bundle of nerves and I'm glad she's got Dice looking out for her.


Malcolm is lucky to be alive, lets be honest. I started watching Scandal the other day and me thinks Dice would be like Olivia Pope to make him disappear. He's the worst!


I can't wait to see what comes next for DJ (as well as her and Gates) next! : )

Author's Response:

I love the Scandal reference! Who knows... maybe Dice will do exactly that. ;) Unfortunately we have not seen the end of him. He will show his ugly face again here soon. 

As for DJ and Brian, they also have some more fun surprises coming their way! I hope you enjoy the new chapter too. ;) Thank you for your kind words! 

Name: Mcruechick (Signed) · Date: 05 Nov 2020 01:30 AM · For: Better You Than Me

Loving this story, the engagement between all characters. Can't wait to see where it goes!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far! :)

Name: Death (Signed) · Date: 03 Nov 2020 02:50 AM · For: Knockout

Hearing from Dice's perspective was awesome, she's so bold and brash and I loved hearing her thoughts and such. I see that Matt's interested in her, and I hope that goes over well. I'm also super happy Malcolm got his shit roooocked, because he deserves it. 


Can't wait to see what happens with DJ and Brian, I sense a talk coming. Whereeeee will we go next?

Author's Response:

Thank you! Dice is a fun character and there is a lot more to her that I can't wait to share with you guys. She is a tough cookie, but it's all for a good reason. As for DJ and Brian... well, they definitely have some surprises coming there way too! 

Name: Induced Euphoria (Signed) · Date: 28 Oct 2020 04:26 PM · For: Better You Than Me

Oooo, I can't wait to see where this goes! I'm already loving the dynamic between DJ and Dice.


Also, Malcolm? He can go, like...yesterday, haha.


Excited for more! : )

Author's Response:

Thank you! Dice and DJ have a very interesting and very deep relationship. I love writing the two of them! I will have another update soon! 

Name: Death (Signed) · Date: 21 Oct 2020 03:46 AM · For: Better You Than Me

Your story is off to an intriguing and great start. Your writing is very comfortable and nice to read, and very clear and descriptive on what's going on. I'm curious to see where this leads. I can't wait to read about the situation between DJ and Malcolm further, and see how she and mister Synyster Gates continue to get along. So far, so good, but for how much longer? I also can't wait for her brothers to come into the picture. So many things to look forward too!


Good luck in your writing endeavors, looking forward to the next update :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! The DJ and Malcom dynamic will continue to develop and I can promise that thing with Mr. Gates and the Berry bothers will get very interesting. I hope to get another chapter up this weekend! 

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