The plot thickens. I'm loving this. The suspense so far is killing me, I can't wait to see this unfold more and more. I'm super curious about the case that ruined the friendship between Matt and Brian, and I'm even more curious about the Plague. Are they connected to the falling out between the guys? Why did they stop looking for the Plague to begin with? I'm also dying to know why the guys all went to a life of cop/detective work. Did they just tire of the band and all turned to lives of detective work? Were they ever in a band at all in this universe?
The tension in that room is so thick, you could probably run into it like a wall. I love that Jimmy's the middle man between Matt and Brian, whereas Johnny and Zach are just doing everything they can to stay out of it haha. I can't wait to learn more about the drama between them all, and I hope they resolve it as the story goes on. Looking forward to what you have planned next!
All right, I am thoroughly intrigued by this.
I always love a good detective novel, and so far, this is off to a great start. I'm entirely curious about the case, your interpretation of the characters, and the relationships between them. I can't wait to see this mystery unravel. :)
I'm about to reread this first chapter a second time because I'm hype as all hell'
I love a good crime mystery : )
I can't wait to see where this goes! The interactions between the characters thus far has me fascinated.