I'm really intrigued by the setting and descriptions here. I can't wait for more because what's been laid out here just seems so interesting to me : )
AHHHHH HELL YEAH DUDE!! Please, please, PLEASE keep this going, I adore this story so much! Jackal's got such a damn way with words, he manages to say so much with so little, and it's no surprise that Raven's entirely captivated and distracted with him!
Now, my favourite little mystery... Does he indeed have a gun or not? ;) And will Raven be able to get him to open up a little bit???
Awesome work, buddy!!!