Unfortunate circumstances bring Ana Spencer out of Manhattan and into Huntington Beach to check on an old friend. What begins as a welfare check in disguise turns into a journey through a part of the world she'd never see otherwise. Now Ana must find a way to merge everything new she's learned (and gained) into her old ways, without causing too much of a fuss.
I am absolutely loving this story so far! I love the characters, the way you portray the guys, and of course the building drama! It is soo good! I cannot wait for your next update! I also cannot wait to see what is in store for Ana and Brian and if they will get past this little hurdle or not... I'm thinking so, but in a complicated and fun way. Can't wait for more!
Thank you so much! I've been trying really hard on the guys' characterization.
As for Ana and Brian, well, they're going to have an interesting time working together ; )
Sneaking away with Mr. Haner again, eh? Daddy won't like that. Haha I love this and cannot wait to see where your characters take us next!
What he doesn't know won't hurt him too much ; )
Thank you for reading! I'm glad you're enjoying the story thus far!
Thank you for another brilliantly written chapter! I really love Brian and Ana's dynamic. It's almost like a back and forth game of cat and mouse and it is very intriguing! I cannot wait to find out what happens with them and to learn more about Ana in NYC. It will be very interesting to see how they cross paths again! I can't wait for more!
Thank you for such a lovely review! Cat and mouse is a very good description of their relationship — I love it! They'll be crossing paths again soon enough, promise.
What another great chapter! I loved the family dynamics and the drama! It was like a game of ping pong back and forth and was beautifully written as always. I'm so glad Ana also left that asshole at the airport after being a douche. He totally deserved that. It was also interesting to see Ana's uncle take her side and tease her father a little bit. I loved it and cannot wait for more... as I'm sure they will get into more trouble come October! ;)
Haha, the Spencer Family is quite entertaining to write because there's a lot of personality in this part of the family tree — and that's without including Ana's maternal family. Her mom, Lilia, hasn't said much yet, but she definitely will before we fully get back to California.
Geoffrey deserves many things. He'll get them by the end ;)
And trouble is coming, sooner than you think!
Let me just start by saying that I absolutely love Blair's character and the way that you write Jimmy! It is sooo good! I loved your other story too and I cannot wait for more! Please update soon!
Thank you!! I'm really glad to hear that <3 I hope you enjoy the new chapter!
Loved the update! I just feel bad for Blair. Tyler should not speak to his best friend that way or make her feel that way. Hopefully it was just the alcohol talking. Maybe Jimmy will come rescue her? I can't wait to see what happens next!
Thank you! Tyler is a bit of a dick, I think haha Maybe Jimmy will! I guess we'll have to see ;)
Another update today! It's like Christmas and it surely didn't disappoint!! I loved your characterization of Brian! It was so good! Brian, Jimmy, and Blair together are so much fun and I cannot wait to see what kind of trouble they get into together. It's going to be fantastic! As always, I can't wait for more!
Thank you!! Merry fake Christmas ;)
I just love BP and JS together! They are just too sweet! I love how he sees the best in her already and they just met... ah. I can't get enough! Beautiful written as always, love!
Thank you! I appreciate that! As a previously heavy Brian story, I love to hear Blimmy getting some love. I hope you continue to love it!
Again... the two of the are adorable! I hope she decides to call Jimbo later! She needs the being string bean in her life! But... will Blair eventually let him in? That is the question? I'm sure we shall see!
I loved the Jimmy pep talk! It was perfect and I'll say it again, I love them together. There is just something so real and amazing about their character interaction. I cannot wait to see what trouble they get into on their night out. Jimmy and BP. Love love love!
Thank you! I love them too. They're such a good little duo. I'm glad you love them. <3
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Kimmmiiieee! I'm so glad you are over here! I can't wait to re-read this! I love it just as much as I did the first time! Please update soon! Also, if you would like to continue our co-write we started a while ago, let me know!
Heyyyyy!!! It's been a while! Violet told me she was putting all her stories on here, so I thought I try it too! :) I'm thinking about that co-write a lot, but the last year has been hard on me and I didn't write. If I get in the swing of things again we should definitely pick it up :)
New Chapter is up by the way... even though you already know how it goes! ;-)
Ahh and Mia knows... plus Matt called her out in front of the crowd! So good! I'm also very excited to hear you have new ideas! I hope that you will feel the urge to write again! I know I felt better getting back to writing! I even have a new story up on here that brings together some different characters from old fanfics just because I loved them so much. As always, can't wait for more!
Ah it's so good to put stuff back out there and get comments as nice as yours :) I hope things will get back to normal for me soon, for writing and reading. I will try and update again over the weekend :)